How do you feel knowing that the government has the ability to listen in on your calls, read your text messages, and even use your phones GPS as a way to keep track of where you are? Sounds like George Orwell's Novel, 1984. However right now, all over the United States groups are focused on protecting your rights to your digital information. Currently, Apple is locked a strong legal battle with our own Federal Bureau of Investigation. One must become educated in the ways to understand and protect your right to personal privacy and freedom.
One method I would find very effective is utilizing social media and online message boards. One unique way that could reach out to a very large social group is reddit through the commonly used "Writing Prompt" section which could come up with very broad ideas. Also Apple's online forums could be reached out to for information as well. I did both.
I am a little confused...are you pitching the idea that the government spying on us is wrong? or are you pitching that we need to become more knowledgeable on ways to protect ourselves?
ReplyDeleteWhen you read the first sentence, it seems like you're talking about how the spying is wrong and an invasion of privacy; but when you read the last sentence (of the first paragraph) and the following paragraph it sounds that you are trying to promote different methods of retaining privacy.
Also, you should define your audience. This pitch seems like you're talking to people in general.
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